[Academic Integrated R&W] Final Project Essay Group 5

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jiajia
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[Academic Integrated R&W] Final Project Essay Group 5

文章jiajia » 2016-06-10, 13:10

[Academic Integrated R&W] Final Project Essay Group 5

Read the essay (please see the attached file).
Please leave comments about their point of view on this topic.
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630531706
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Re: [Academic Integrated R&W] Final Project Essay Group 5

文章630531706 » 2016-06-15, 23:25

Well, I think it's a well connected essay with good logic development. ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) There is three main environemnt problem discussed in this essay. As for the green house effect, this essay show us that we should reducing CO2 by conserving, OK, we should also develop more energy-efficient. To be honest, some readers may still be a little confusing, I think, one more example will make it. :D :D :D :D :D :D

chloe0730000
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文章chloe0730000 » 2016-06-16, 09:03

I think this essay is well-organized and points out all the information that the readers needed. Aside from that, I personally like the counter argument part, they point out all the possible questions that the public may concern and also come up with one possible solution, the solar panels, might solve those problems that public concern; however, due to the high fixed cost of installing solar panels so the best solutions are the one that they have come up with. Well done!!

nevertheless1010
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文章nevertheless1010 » 2016-06-16, 13:57

I really appreciate the idea about protecting the existing forest. Although planning trees to protect and recover forests is important, I think that protecting the existing trees is more urgent. I do agree that people has to take planting tree as a long run methods; however, protecting the existing trees is not only a short run methods but also a long run one.

jane4house
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文章jane4house » 2016-06-16, 22:02

Provide lots of examples to support their solutions are the great part for this essay. However, I think some of the examples may not clearly point out the connection to their ideas. For example, in second paragraph, it doesn’t mention about why Asia Pulp and Paper Group collaborate with the supply chain can achieve the goal to deforestation-free. So, in my opinion, the author should give more descriptions of the examples. :D :D :D

lovepower0507
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文章lovepower0507 » 2016-06-19, 21:42

jiajia 寫:[Academic Integrated R&W] Final Project Essay Group 5

Read the essay (please see the attached file).
Please leave comments about their point of view on this topic.


Thank this essay provides some practical methods to solve environmental problems.
Nevertheless, I have comments on the essay.
First, in deforestation part, it didn't shows what the material they could replace to? Also, It didn't shows the actual statistic that how succeed that the way to solve desertification.
Besides, in counterargument part, it tells that produce recycling paper will produce some chemical emission; however, commercial enterprises use other ways to replace deforestation may produce chemical emission, too.


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